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Dear Congressperson, 

 although I am not in the labor force,I have many friends are employed and unemployed. I think college students maintain a high unemployment rate.There are some reasons causing the structural unemployment. 1, We usually focus on basic knowledge and lack the learning of applied knowledge in school. However, with the reform and development of society, college students not only need proficient operating skills, but also other abilities, such as innovation ability, logical thinking ability, interpersonal communication ability, language expression ability, organization and coordination ability, and psychological endurance. 2. Many of us have too high aspirations and lack accurate positioning and career planning. Most college students choose to find jobs in their primary markets. The jobs offered by the secondary market usually do not meet their requirements.

I do not think the unemployment caused by Covid will get better soon because it already made big changes in their life no matter it is physical and mental.People need time to fit in ,and they might choose something new after the covid and have a different life pattern.

Discouraged worker exist all the time, it might affect other motivated workers, but I don’t think we should worry woo much.Because people have different level of accepting things. The terrible thing is that workers don’t know their core competitiveness. If they do, they can deeply analyze their core competitive advantages and position ,and then find the career direction.It can help recover from the pandemic.

W-shaped double dip recession with a short-lived recovery followed by a severe drop in activity in 2020 due to a second wave of containment measures. But is getting better in 2021

Peers- To have a quick economy recover, it must need the strong workforce, how can you motivate them and find a job?or how can we have more job opportunities?

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